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The Rewrite

Embrace the Backspace

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The Rewrite is a writing workshop podcast where our hosts, Sarah Holman, Thomas Grossi and Jared Graham each week critique a piece of writing from our listeners and peers. As students in the writing program at UVic, we are offering peer review and feedback using Liz Lerman’s Critical Response for all genres of writing. Our hosts look at what is working in a piece, respond to the writer’s questions, ask questions of our own, and offer opinions or suggestions. It’s tie to embrace the backspace and start rewriting!

In our first episode we dive into the script “Safe and Sound” by Eric (Arie) Kwakernaak which has recently been shortlisted for the Annual Screencraft Screenplay Competition. The script is a drama with a hint of horror wherein 10 year old Zeke stumbles across an old safe that has the power to bring objects to life.

Special thanks to our Audio Engineer and intro song writer, Michael John Lo for editing the podcast!

Take a look at Eric Kwakernaak’s “Safe and Sound” here:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cg-UFGfhyuxWG-21X0Zzr2PFy9jkUqNv/view?usp=sharing

Annual Screencraft Screenplay Competition here:

https://screencraft.org/short-film/

Check out Liz Lerman’s Critical Response here:

https://lizlerman.com/critical-response-process/

Some sound effects sourced from:

www.zapsplat.com

Timestamps:

Intro: 0:00

What We’re Reading: 0:39

Statements of Meaning: 1:38

Questions from Writer: 5:04

Neutral Questions: 13:29

Opinions: 16:23

Outro: 21:15

Social Media:

Eric Kwakernaak: @erickwakernaak

Sarah Holman: @sarahholman_

Thomas Grossi: @thomas_grossi

Michael John Lo: @michaeljohnlo

Jared Graham: @jared_c_graham