What craft tools make a low-budget, contained, period drama riveting?
Explore how narrative POV, interweaving relationships, hooky dialogue, and even the screenplay format itself make the script for BLUE MOON - that runs largely in real time about an obscure songwriter in the 1940s - one that attracts world class talent and Academy Award nominations.
While Stu is still on show and we are between the 2026 Oscar nominations and the actual ceremony, our patreons selected BLUE MOON for this one-shot and boy are Mel and Chas glad they did. They dive into many lessons learned in previous episodes, like our character-driven episode… or analysis of French scenes in Adolescence… or the story-telling power that comes from the audience knowing the ending from biopics.
As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.
CHAPTERS
00:00:00 - BLUE MOON
00:02:19 - Summary of Key Learnings
00:13:34 - Controlling narrative POV
00:27:49 - Using screenplay FORMAT to reflect the emotional story
00:39:27 - Interweaving relationships
00:56:46 - Repetition and pop culture references in dialogue
01:07:54 - Key learnings in full
01:16:02 - Patreon thanks!
LINKS
Read the script for BLUE MOON on Script Slug
See the slug line breakdown at https://melkillingsworth.substack.com/p/blue-moon-scene-headings-breakdown
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