I have said it before, the AI can work so much better when the lyrics are well stuctured, short well "punctuated" lines and with explicit tags where possible. I also find that lone wordy prompts can confuse the AI, and lead to more randomness.
Well on this one, after 2 iterations I had 4 usable tracks, unfortunately I had to choose 3 of them to forget. The reasons where almost ridiculous, The first ended too soon on the last note after 4 mins. The second was too short? I made a couple of small edits, based on those two and the regenerated. The next two were almost perfect, I chose one of them because of the voice.....
The song was actually quite a short one written in 1990 (as far as I can tell?) which I had probably meant to finish. In my notebook in consisted of 2 verses. For the Suno version, I split the first verse into 2, and the second verse into a bridge and a third verse. Hence the very short lines in the lyric. I also edited a few words so I could use a female vocalist.
I absolutely love the resulting offering, purists and perfectionists may find erasons to complain; however my only condsideration is how well the track demo's my song. I do not expect to ever release these except on social media to share with friends and fellow songwriters. The tracks are not for monetisation. Hope you like the "song"