I was looking thru my notebook today and found this half-finished song, Mmmm, I thought, not like me. I rather liked the original ideas although I had run down one or two rabbit hols which is why I probably left it - and forgot about it ?
I took the lyric to pieces and reassembled it with some new ideas. This was this was the result, a couple of moths late! First run thru with Suno, I chose an alternative rock (anthemic) genre, but it was obvious that a much simpler, Folk based, presentation would be much better. A few minor adaptions and soon reached this version. I did have difficulty picking 1 from those versions I had collected, But finally decided I liked this one, hope you can like it as much as I do.