The Paradox Song Review
Composed and produced by Paploviante /British accent Speech added by Bruce Conover
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These were comments made on Paradox Review website about the song we both composed entitled Run Rabbit Run which can be found on page
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Bass Paploviante
Logic Pro X
Review:
The intro in this track just flows so well, it's so chilled out and easy to listen to. Love the way the guitar riff flows in to the mellow vocals and I have to praise the undramatic use of backing vocals which add a heavenly, soulful sound to the track. Sounds similar to Lynyrd Skynyrd - I'd definitely listen to this artist again, a very easy listen
I really enjoy the guitar in this song. It has a nice sound to it I could honestly just listen to it. Your voice isn't exactly what I enjoy listening too it's kind of boring sounding. At the one part of the song you have some drums pick up the tempo a bit.. and I was hoping that the song was going to completely pick up in speed but I was kind of disappointed when it did not.
Although I enjoy the instruments in this song I dislike the pitch at which this song is sung. It is to low key and very weary. It tells of a good story and has great lyrics I would just rather not like the way it is sung. I would advise the creator to give it a little more emotion next time. So it will be more enjoyable.
I don't think the song is commercial. The artist varies the sound of the guitar. Some of the music hearts my ears and sound alike an echo effect which i really don't like. I would listen to the song again. The song could be more original. I think it would be suitable for older males.
This late 80's feel that the song gives off is a nice change of pace from the heavy type of rock and power chords that you usualy get from a song. It gives you a down to earth feeling. while the song has a bit of a slow beginning it does end up picking up just slightly, but even throughout it it never loses the soft back beat that keeps the rhythm. When you listen to the lyrics it is quite clear that it is trying to convey a message to the listener and it makes the song easier to listen to and understand.
The slow guitar goes really nice, the lyrics are really hard to understand and does not seem to make sense. There is not too mant different instruments but the drums are there and that does not go well as an slow version. Its does all mix amazingly well together. Would work better as a country or western style but as it goes quite nice all together.
I really liked the lyrics and I think the instruments sounded great with them, I also like how some of the lyrics were echoed. I think maybe you could have used the backing singers more because sometimes it sounded a bit bare. I loved the instrumental in the middle. Other than my one point, I think it sounded great!
Nice, strong bass instrumentals to start off the song, they catch the audiences' attention and digs within the human body to the spot that likes to pulsate with the base. Unfortunately, that strong bass is not maintained and should have been better taken care of throughout the song. The vocalist has a nice, echoing voice that adds to t he pulsation that the bass started at the songs starting point. The drums are a nice extra, emphasized instrumental that provides a light, rhythmic consistency to the song. The light and airy guitar playing is a good contrast with what should be a stronger bass. With the guitar in place, the song receives an almost angelic, classic rock kind of feel. The vocalist also has a kind of haunting voice the sounds like the artist has seen and experienced the pain and suffering of the world and is looking for ways, such as music, to take away some of the bad. The guitar solo is a happy section of the song, but the bass really needs to be pumped up to truly make
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