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The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 287 - Pitching with Pitch Master Lindsey HughesIn this episode, Jeff sits down with Pitch Master Lindsey Hughes to discuss why pitching is important and how to pitch your work. They then read pitches from the Dialoggers and offered feedback. To find Lindsey's work, go to https://thepitchmaster.com/ For more on the craft of writting, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2025-08-041h 40
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 286 - The Artisan Author with Johnny B TruantIn this episode, Jeff sits down with Johnny B Truant to talk about his new work The Artisan Author. They discuss how he understands himself as an author, how his understanding is shaping his craft, and how he hopes to bring joy back to the indie author world. To learn more about Johnny's work, check out https://johnnybtruant.com/ To see Johnny's Kickstarter, go to https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/johnnybtruant/the-artisan-author-your-way-out-of-the-self-pub-rat-race2025-07-2859 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 285 - Answering All Your Publishing Questions with Emily BarrosseIn this episode, Jeff is joined by publishing veteran and founder of Bold Story Press, Emily Barrosse. Emily tackles 7 (plus a few more) questions from listners about publishing. Questions are: Are publishers more likely to accept submissions from agents or do they equally accept direct subs? What's the proportion of submissions accepted via agents vs directly from authors? What timeline can I expect with a traditional publisher (small, mid, or large)? If an author is adamant about not wanting to change their story in any way, should they avoid seeking a traditional publisher and pursue independent pub...2025-07-211h 14
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 284 - How to Plot a 2nd Book and Build a SeriesIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Dixie Williams. Dixie has finished her first novel and would like to write a second about one of the side characters. She and Jeff plot out the novel based on how the characters might grow and look at what a series might look like. For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2025-07-141h 05
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 283 - Time with Tom!In this episode, Jeff is joined by Tom Holbrook (author, editor, coach, and former bookstore owner). They discuss story and what they are seeing as editors. 2025-07-071h 14
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 281 - Examining Sonny's Blues by James BaldwinIn this episode, Jeff meets up with three of the members of the Dialogue Doctor Community to dissect and learn from the short story Sonny's Blues by James Baldwin. For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2025-06-231h 25
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 280 - Adding Emotional Weight with Dennis KurlasIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Dennis Kurlas to talk about his work in progress. They discuss the options you have when your novel is almost finished and you are tweaking it. Specifically, they discuss how to add emotional weight to scenes. For more on the craft of writing, check out DialogueDoctor.com2025-06-1652 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 279 - Jeff and Laura Q&AIn this episode, Jeff and Laura answer questions from the community. Questions include: Where is the sweet spot between frustrating the reader by having the characters either over-explain or under-explain how their world works? Do you have any advice on how to write movement without using the words directly associated with the action? For example, the phrase "The leaves rustled about him." Can this phrase serve as a substitute for he turned, he spun, he twirled, or even he levitated? I’d love to hear your thoughts on how we can use phrases creatively to si...2025-06-091h 27
Adventure Travel Podcast - Big World Made SmallAdventure Travel with Jeff Peterson - Reelin Family FunJeff PetersonOwner & FounderReelin Family FunMeet Jeff Peterson, the spirited owner of Reelin Family Fun! He’s all about transforming ordinary family outings into extraordinary adventures filled with laughter and learning. With a deep passion for fishing and exploring the outdoors, Jeff, along with the dedicated Reelin Family Fun Staff, creates interactive experiences that bring families closer to nature and each other. It’s not just about the fish you catch, it’s about the time spent together and the memories made! Known for his love of the outdoo...2025-06-041h 03
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 278 - Story Structure: Plots, Mosaic Plots, and Love ActuallyIn this episode, Jeff teaches the Dialoggers about plot structure. Together they work through plot styles for single vehicle and multi vehicle stories. Then they discuss the story Love Actually and examine how a Mosaic Plot style works. For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2025-06-021h 05
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 277 - Building a Series Through Character GrowthIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Holly Lyne to talk about her series in progress. Jeff and Holly revive her excitement for the series and discover the plot of the series by analyzing the character growth arcs. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2025-05-2659 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 275 - Your Sophomore Year of WritingIn this episode, Jeff interviews Angela Haas and Cassie Newell from The Author Next Door podcast. Jeff, Angela, and Cassie discuss the life of an author and how it changes as you grow and mature. They talk about Cassie and Angela's new adventures into romance and their new podcast. To learn more about what Cassie and Angela are doing, check out https://theauthornextdoor.com/ For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2025-05-121h 07
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 273 - Brainstorming with TarotIn this episode, Dialogue Doctor Coach JP Rindfleisch IX helps Jeff figure scenes to the screenplay he is writing using Tarot. Jeff and JP talk plot and emotional moves and characterization. ' For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2025-04-281h 09
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 272 - How to Sell with Rob JollesIn this episode, Jeff is joined by sales expert Rob Jolles. Rob schools Jeff on what selling is, how to convince people, and why selling is critical to being an author. To find Rob online and work with him, check out https://jolles.com/ For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2025-04-211h 09
A Book Finds You!Jeff ElkinsWith a blend of humor and heart, Jeff shares his unconventional journey to becoming a writer, sparked by a job loss that led him to discover the joy of storytelling. He discusses the challenges and triumphs of writing, from crafting short stories to navigating the complexities of the publishing world. Tune in as we explore Jeff's creative process, his insights on marketing, and the importance of connecting with readers. Get ready for a conversation that might just inspire you to embrace your own writing journey!Visit Jeff Elkins' website at https://jeffelkinswriter.com/ for more information on...2025-04-1842 min
The Author Next DoorEpisode 15: The Prescription for Better Dialogue with Jeff Elkins🎙️ Struggling to write natural, engaging dialogue? Jeff Elkins is here to help.In this episode of The Author Next Door, Cassie Newell and Angela Haas talk craft with Jeff Elkins, award-winning author, editor, and the brilliant mind behind The Dialogue Doctor. Together, they unpack what makes dialogue really work—and how to avoid the most common pitfalls.We dive into:The biggest dialogue mistakes writers make (and how to fix them)Balancing inner thoughts and spoken words on the pageHow to handle conversations with large casts (without confusing your re...2025-04-0955 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 270 - Time with TomIn this episode, Jeff is joined by Tom Holbrook for another TIME WITH TOM. In this episode, they discuss Tom's transition out of bookstore ownership, what they've been reading and what they are learning from it, what issues their clients are facing, and what they are working on. To find Tom and work with him, go to: https://holbrookauthorservices.com/ For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2025-04-071h 15
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 269 - How Perspective Changes a SceneIn this episode, Jeff sits down with Author Don Elliot to talk about his epic fantasy series. They look at Don's opening scene and talk about how adding perspective increases the emotional impact of the scene. They also discuss how to plot a long series by starting with character growth. To find Don't work, check out https://donelliott.us/ For more on the craft of writing, go to: https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2025-03-311h 00
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 268 - Zen in the Art of WritingIn this Joint with JP, Jeff and JP examine Zen in the Art of Writing by Ray Bradbury. They discuss Ray Bradbury's writing challenge, why someone should write, the role of plot in a story, and other nuggets from the book. For more on the craft of dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2025-03-241h 17
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 266 - Plotting Long Story Lines and Finishing the BookIn this episode, Jeff and Dialogue Doctor Coach Laura Humm take questions from the community. They discuss how to manage beta readers, how to find the right developmental editor, what do you need to disclose to an editor about AI, large groups of people talking, and plotting long series. For more on the craft of writing, check out DialogueDoctor.com2025-03-101h 22
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 264 - Pitching Your Work with the Pitch MasterIn this episode, 8 members of the dialogue doctor community sent in pitches of their work. Jeff sits down with Lindsey Hughes to discuss the goods and bads of each pitch. Whether you are pitching your book to an agent, your screenplay, or your book to amazon, the lessons in this episode will be helpful. To find Lindsey and her work, check out https://thepitchmaster.com/ For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2025-02-241h 16
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 262 - Making the Emotional Journey ClearIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author WV Rarick to look at WV's work in progress. They discuss when you should reveal how your character looks, using dialogue tags to change emotional context of an exchange, when to add prose to clarify emotions, and making sure your character growth arcs are clean and easy for the reader to follow. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2025-02-101h 38
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 261 - AI Diagnostics with J ThornIn this episode, the Godfather of the Dialogue Doctor Podcast, J Thorn returns to talk about a new AI tool he has created. Using multiple AI Engines J talks about how he analyzes manuscripts. In the process of discussing his new tool, J and Jeff speculate on the state of the market and on the future of book-selling and AI. To find J's tool, check out https://www.fiverr.com/jthornwriter/critique-your-manuscript-with-ai-and-expertise 2025-02-031h 12
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 258 - Poetry Time with Ed - Allen GinsbergIn this episode of the Dialogue Doctor, our poetry teacher Edward Gillespie returns to teach Jeff all about Allen Ginsberg. They read some of Ginsberg's poetry, discuss the historical importance of his work, and then try to grapple with the controversies surrounding him. To find Ed's work, go to https://apprenticehouse.com/qa-with-edward-doyle-gillespie-author-of-gentrifying-the-plague-house/ For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2025-01-131h 06
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 256 - Cast Breakdown - Nobody Wants ThisIn this episode, Jeff and several of the Dialoggers discuss the Netflix romantic comedy, Nobody Wants This. They talk about the cast, how the personalities interact, and how we can use the VEAH System (Vehicles, Engines, Anchors, and Hazards) to build our own casts that work. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-12-231h 18
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 255 - Time with TomIn this episode, Tom Holbrook returns for another Time with Tom. In this episode, Tom and Jeff break down their favorite stories recently, talk about the difference and similarities between fiction and non-fiction editing, and Tom shares some huge news.2024-12-161h 11
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 254 - Understanding the Tools to Write EmotionIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Lisa Bonneau to look at the story she is working on. Lisa comes to the session with three questions: How to increase the emotional tension of a scene? 2. How to create more artistic sounding body language? 3. When to add body language into a piece? In response, Jeff breaks down how emotions work on the page and the different tools we as writers have to enhance or diminish them. Jeff, Laura, and JP are available to book for coaching sessions at https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-12-091h 14
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 253 - Publishing with Emily BarrosseIn this episode, Jeff interviews Emily Barrosse from Bold Story Press. They discuss Emily's 32 years in the publishing industry, how she has seen publishing evolve, her advice for new writers entering the industry, her passion for publishing female voices, and much more. To find Emily and Bold Story Press, go to https://www.boldstorypress.com/ For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-12-0259 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 251 - Jeff and Laura Q&AIn this episode, Jeff and Laura come together for a Q&A. Questions from the Dialoggers included: ---How do you keep track of everything for long, complex stories with elaborate world building? ---How do you make a novel's opening scene engaging while also needing to establish 'the new world'? ---Considering how expensive audio books are to produce, at what point should an indie author jump on it? ---What are some good tactics on how to improve your prose and more clearly find your voice? ---How do you make necessary transition scenes i...2024-11-182h 06
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 249 - Structuring Dialogue and Emotional Flow with Dillon MesquittaIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Dillon Mesquitta to talk about Dillon's work in progress. They discuss the structure of Dillon's dialogue and look at the emotional flow of Dillon's characters. For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-11-041h 23
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 248 - Building a Difficult Character with Carol PainterIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Carol Painter to talk about her work in progress. They discuss a difficult character who's story ends in tragedy. They discuss the character's negative choices, how the character is going to change, and how that builds into the themes of the book. They then look at scenes together in which the character is making choices. If you want more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-10-2859 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 247 - A Joint with JP - Examining the Dip by Seth GodinIn this episode, Dialogue Doctor Coaches Jeff Elkins and JP Rindfleisch IX discuss "The Dip" by Seth Godin. Jeff walks JP through the book and they talk about how it should inform author's decision and shape (or not shape) and author's mindset. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-10-231h 24
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 246 - Scene Beats with Laura Humm and Dennis KurlasIn this episode, Dialogue Doctor Coach Laura Humm sits down with author Dennis Kurlas to talk about a scene in Dennis' work in progress. They talk through the beats of the scene. They discuss how to keep an emotional flow through the beats, why beats should be deleted, and how to keep beats rolling from one to the next. Also, Jeff talks about his time at the annual conference for the Maryland Writers Association and what he learned from the weekend. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-10-211h 11
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 245 - Author Mindset with Honoree CorderIn this episode, Jeff talks with thought leader and inspirational thinker Honoree Corder. They discuss accepting yourself and your work, the power of visualization, having rigor and discipline with your art and life, why marketing is a necessity, and why authors shouldn't be a afraid of it. To find more about Honoree and engage deeper in her thought, check out https://honoreecorder.com/ For more on the craft of writing, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-10-161h 06
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 243 - How to Pitch Your Work with Lindsey HughesIn this episode, Jeff sits down with The Pitch Master, Lindsey Hughes to talk about pitching your story. They discuss the difference between a screenplay and a novel. Lindsey gives networking tips, and Lindsey walks Jeff through give long and short pitches to stories. For more of Lindsey's work, check out https://thepitchmaster.com/ Also, come and get coaching at https://dialoguedoctor.com/coaching/2024-10-0954 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 241 - Michele Berger, Short Stories, and Walter Mosley's Crime FictionIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Michele Berger. They discuss Michele's new book Doll Seed and then pivot to examining the writing of Walter Mosley. Michele is the Eric and Jane Nord Family Professor in the Department of Religious Studies and director of the Baker-Nord Center for the Humanities at Case Western Reserve University. If you are interested in Michele's new book, you can find it here: https://www.amazon.com/Doll-Seed-Michele-Tracy-Berger/dp/1951874072/ If you are interested in the Leonid McGill book we discussed (Trouble is What I Do), go to: https://www...2024-10-021h 16
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 240 - Writing Action Scenes and the Big Cast with Phil YatesIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Phil Yates look at a historical fiction novel Phil is writing. They discuss writing action scenes and managing a big cast. They look at how dialogue empowers combat scenes, switching POVs in the middle of a chapter, keeping track of characters, picking the pain for the reader, and cast combinations. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-09-301h 15
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 239 - Dialogue Doctor Coaches Unite!In this episode, the three Dialogue Doctor Coaches (Jeff, Laura, and JP) unite to talk about what they are learning, what they are working on, and why everyone should sign up for the Dialogue Dash. To sign up for the Dash, click here: https://dialoguedoctor.teachable.com/p/dialogue-dash-80-days-until-done-fall-2024 For more on the craft of writing, click here: https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-09-251h 15
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 238 Maximizing Dialogue in Your Story with MendiIn this episode, Jeff and Mendi look at the beats of her story and talk about how to create a powerful emotional experience by using dialogue. They how the size of the cast in each scene changes what you should do with the scene, how the number of characters in the scene impact the intimacy with the reader, and where to put exposition in the story. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-09-231h 05
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 236 - How to Build a Cast with Victoria TaitIn this session, Jeff and Victoria Tait take a deep dive into building a cast. They talk about building characters across a series, the VEAH system, how to direct character change over a single books and multiple books, designing characters for your genre, and more. For more on the craft of writing, check out the DialogueDoctor.com - https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-09-161h 12
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 234 - Turning Summaries into Scenes with Liz MasonIn this episode, Jeff sits down with new author Liz Mason to talk about Liz's work in process. The talk about how the reader experiences emotion in a story, why it is important to have characters interacting, and how to find a scene if you have written a lot of summaries. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-09-091h 08
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 231 - Cast Analysis of Knives OutIn this episode, Jeff sits down with members of the community to analyze the cast of Knives Out. They discuss how the multiple vehicle structure works, how the cast members impact one another, and what we can learn from the script for our own work. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-08-281h 07
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 230 - Creating Characters with Emotional Resonance with Holly LyneIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Holly Lyne to look at her work in progress. They talk about laying out the emotional beats of a scene, world building in dialogue, creating mystery in a book and a scene, and using body language and inner thoughts to pull the reader into the emotional experience. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-08-261h 17
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 229 - Empowering Your Writing through the Enneagram with Claire TaylorIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author and Enneagram guru Claire Taylor. Jeff and Claire talk about why author's should know their number, how the Enneagram compares to other personality assessments, why the Enneagram is good for self understanding, and then ways you can use the Enneagram as a writer. You can find all things Claire Taylor at FFS Media - https://www.ffs.media For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-08-2155 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 225 - Talking Great Stories - Time with TomIn this Time with Tom, Editor, Bookstore Owner, and author Tom Holbrook takes time out of his vacation to talk books and personal updates with Jeff. To find Tom's work, check out his services here https://holbrookauthorservices.com/ For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-08-071h 06
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 224 - Powerful Scenes and Short Stories with Mary Van EverboeckIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Mary Van Everboeck to talk about a short story she is writing. They talk about finding themes, creating driving conflicts, and the difference between a short story and a scene from a novel. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-08-051h 07
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 223 - The Anti-Racist Writing Workshop (a Joint with JP)In this episode, Dialogue Doctor Coaches Jeff Elkins and JP Rindfleisch IX talk about the book The Anti-Racist Writing Workshop by Felicia Rose Chavez. They discuss the principles of the book, how they aspire to replicate these attitudes in their coaching, and how this kind of work has impacted their writing and editing. And Jeff makes everything mushy in the end. For more on the craft of writing, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ To get a copy of The Anti-Racist Writing Workshop, go to https://www.antiracistworkshop.com/2024-07-311h 09
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 221 - Behind the Scenes of Traditional Publishing with Chuck SambuchinoIn this episode, Jeff has all his questions about traditional publishing by Chuck Sambuchino. Chuck talks with Jeff about how to approach agents, what authors' expectations around traditional publishing should be, and what about traditional publishing is a myth vs what is real. For Chuck's blog, events, and writing, check out https://chucksambuchino.com/ For more on writing dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-07-2458 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 219 - Leslye Penelope and World BuildingIn this episode, Jeff interviews award-winning author Leslye Penelope. They discuss her author career, her writing podcasts, and how she builds powerful fantasy worlds. To find Leslye's work, go to https://lpenelope.com/ For more on writing characters and dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-07-1747 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 218 - Epic Fantasy and Romantic TensionIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Joan Lightning to look at Joan's work-in-progress. They talk about keeping all the characters included in the dialogue, using character positioning and body language to build romantic tension, using inner thoughts, avoiding summaries, and building fantasy worlds. For more on writing powerful dialogue and characters, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-07-151h 14
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 217 - Editing and Writing Character Voices - Laura and Jeff Q&AIn this episode, Dialogue Doctor Coach Laura Humm and Jeff answer questions from the Dialoggers about editing character voices, writing accents, building languages from scratch, and the difference between a scene and a chapter. For more on writing dialogue, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-07-101h 19
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 214 - Pacing the Energy of Your Story with Miss Catherine HernandezIn this episode, Jeff sits down with Editor and High Fantasy/Steam Punk writer Catherine Herandez. They discuss a short story Catherine is working on. They discuss introducing characters, balancing tension in scenes, and organizing your story around emotional tension. They also get into world-building and explaining the setting of the scene. For more on writing dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-07-0156 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 213 - Flashbacks and Pacing with Lisa BonneauIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Lisa Bonneau to talk about her work in progress. They talk about seamlessly integrating flashbacks into a scene and keeping one-on-one scenes building energy. For more on dialogue, come and join us at https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-06-261h 00
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 211 - Understanding Your Cast (Engines, Anchors, and Hazards)In this solo episode, Jeff breaks down different types of cast members and how to use them to manipulate the power of your scenes and the power of your plot. This episode if part two of a teaching on cast building. Part one is episode 185 - https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024/01/24/episode-185-understanding-your-main-characters/ For more on writing dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-06-201h 02
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastSession 210 - Plot, Character Growth, and Cast with Aaron BettsIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Aaron Betts to talk through Aaron's work in progress. They look at Aaron's plot, discuss how the story should operate as a journey narrative, and talk about how the characters should change as the journey progresses. They then discuss the characters and how they compliment each other as engines and anchors. For more on writing dialogue, head over to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-06-1755 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 209 - Time with TomIn this episode, Jeff hangs out with author/editor/bookstore owner Tom Holbrook. They talk about stories they've enjoyed recently and stories they've consumed that were broken. They then discuss what someone should look for in an editor; and Jeff also goes full "grumpy old man" about publishing as he and Tom talk about what they are encountering as editors. For Tom's editing services go to https://holbrookauthorservices.com/ Find Tom's bookstore at https://riverrunbookstore.com/ For more from the Dialogue Doctor, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-06-121h 12
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 207 - Joint with JP - Scene and Structure by Jack M. BickhamIn this episode, Jeff and Dialogue Doctor Coach JP Rindfleisch IX discuss the classic book on writing scenes, "Scene & Structure" by Jack M. Bickham. They talk about the evolution of writing advice, the system Bickham sets up for scene building, and the components of an amazing scene. For more on writing amazing dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-06-051h 27
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 205 - Publisher and Agent David MorrisIn this episode, Jeff sits down with publisher and author agent David Morris to talk about his history in publishing, the difference between a small publisher and an agent, and what he looks for in authors. You can find David's publishing house (Lake Drive Books) at https://www.lakedrivebooks.com/ You can find his work as a literary agent (Hyponymous Literary Agency) at https://www.hyponymous.com/ For more on dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-05-3046 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 204 - Setting Up Characters for Emotional Payoffs with Holly LyneIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Holly Lyne to look at the first chapter of Holly's work in progress. They discuss the character growth arc and then look for ways in the first chapter to set up the character for stronger emotional payoff as the character changes. They also look at the character's voice and modulating the voice to demonstrate change. For more on Dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/summer-fall-2024-events/ 2024-05-271h 20
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 203 - Looking at the Vehicle Characters of the Big Short by Michael LewisIn this Episode, Jeff meets up with some of the Dialoggers (members of the Dialogue Doctor Community) to talk about the movie the Big Short and discuss how to craft a story with multiple vehicle characters. To join the Dialogger community and participate in conversations like this, go to https://www.patreon.com/JeffElkins2024-05-221h 29
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 201 - Matt Brook, Finding Your Story, and Discovering Your ConfidenceIn this episode, Jeff sits down with first time author Matt Brook to talk about the beats of his first story. Matt comes to Jeff with a summary of the story, and they work together to find the scenes in the summary. They talk about how to find the confidence you need to finish your book, goals as an author, whether or not you should be worried about genre conventions, and how to take a summary of a story and find the scenes you need to make it work. Jeff shows Matt how to find a beat inside each...2024-05-1349 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 200 - The Celebration!In this episode, Jeff, JP, and Laura (the Dialogue Doctor Coaches) join forces to talk about what they've learned in the last three years, their favorite moments, what they hope to attempt in the future, what is coming in the fall of 2024, and other things. For more from the Dialogue Doctor Coaches, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-05-061h 38
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 197 - Time with TomJeff and editor/writer/bookstore owner Tom Holbrook come together to talk about what they are seeing in the book world. They talk about things they are encountering frequently as editors, stories that they've recently loved, stories they consumed that were broken, and about the state of publishing in general. To find Tom online, go to https://holbrookauthorservices.com/ For more on writing dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-04-141h 28
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 195 - Poetry Month with Edward Doyle-Gillespie (Content Warning)WARNING - this episode contains conversation about suicide and violence. If you are thinking about hurting yourself, please call 988 now. Help is available. You can speak with someone today. In this episode, we are kicking off poetry month. Jeff sits down with poet Edward Doyle-Gillespie to talk about what inspires Ed to write poetry, why he loves it, and how it is different than writing fiction. To find more of Ed's poetry, check out his work on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/edoylegillespie?mibextid=ZbWKwL2024-04-0154 min
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 194 - Building a Cast that Works with Jenny WilsonIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Jenny Wilson to talk about her cast. They work through her vehicle's voice and how her vehicle needs to change during the story, then they talk about her surrounding cast members and how those cast members can enhance the reader's experience. For more on dialogue and characterization, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-03-251h 10
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 193 - Don Elliot and Plotting a Giant SeriesIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Don Elliot to talk about plotting out a longer series. They talk about how to manage it, how to role it out to readers, and how to make it feel realistic. Jeff stresses in the episode that it is important to hook the reader at the scene/character level. They also talk plot structures, Game of Thrones, and the Godfather. For more on this, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/ 2024-03-181h 09
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 192 - JP Joint - You're Gonna Need a Bigger StoryIn this episode, JP Rindfleisch the IX and Jeff talk about Houston Howard's book, You're Gonna Need a Bigger Story. JP takes Jeff through the main points and the process together how the story might impact their writing. To find more of JP, check out https://www.jprindfleischix.com/ For more on writing dialogue, go to https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-03-111h 06
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 191 - Eric Heuser and Adding Inner MonologueIn this episode, Jeff sits down with author Eric Heuser to look at a scene Eric is working on. Jeff and Eric talk about adding a POV to a work in progress, building emotional resonance, writing a character with a different interior and exterior voice, using reflective prose in segment breaks to give the reader a feeling of intimacy. For more on dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/2024-03-041h 01
The Dialogue Doctor PodcastEpisode 190 - Laura and Jeff Q&AIn this episode, Laura and Jeff answer questions from the Dialoggers. Questions include: --Suggestions for plotting and planning a longer series, --How to write dialogue in a group scene where you have six or more characters in the discussion? --When trying to establish characters, world, and show the 'normal' state of life for them, how do you keep it interesting? This is especially tricky with fantasy considering the world building. --How do you choose to read a new author? Like do you choose mood or genre first? What do you type into Amazon?2024-02-261h 33
Your Enneagram Coach, the PodcastEpisode 200: Using Enneagram Tritypes to Dive Deeper into Your Unique Personality w/Angie ElkinsDo you know your Enneagram Tritype?In this week's podcast episode, Beth interviews Angie Elkins (Type 8), host of the Let It Shine podcast and manager of the Lifeway Podcast Network. Angie opens up about her resonance with Enneagram Types 8, 7, and 4 and how the concept of Tritypes helps her understand her unique personality.FREE Enneagram resources here: https://www.yourenneagramcoach.com/podcastresources In this episode you will:✅ Discover the diff...2023-12-0457 min
Self-Publishing with ALLiHow to Emotionally Reach Your Readers, With Jeff Elkins — Self-Publishing Conference HighlightIn this Self-Publishing Conference Highlight, Jeff Elkins discusses how to emotionally reach your readers. It's not enough to get a reader to pick up our books. We also have to reach them emotionally in order to keep them reading past the first chapter and to inspire them to tell their friends about our stories. The good news is, people are communal in nature. We are hard-wired to connect emotionally with one another, and authors can exploit that wiring with our storytelling by keeping our stories dialogue-centric. By the end of this session, you will learn: how...2023-09-2749 min
Revision WizardsE029 - Interview with The Dialogue Doctor, Jeff ElkinsIn this episode, returning guest Jeff Elkins talks with V.E. Griffith and Miss Catherine M.H. about dialogue, and the keys to writing fantastic dialogue that will engage your readers and help them fall in love with your characters.
Find Jeff at https://dialoguedoctor.com
Books
The Dialogue Doctor Will See You Now: How To Write Dialogue And Characters Readers Will Love
Dialogue: The Art of Verbal Action for Page, Stage and Screen by Robert McKee
Movies/Videos
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The Indy Author PodcastThe Dialogue Doctor Will See You Now with Jeff Elkins - #198 Matty Dalrymple talks with Jeff Elkins about his book THE DIALOGUE DOCTOR WILL SEE YOU NOW, including how the writing craft is like football; the importance of understanding the craft tools you need to attain moments of artistry; how writing dialogue is not a soft skill; how dialogue isn't only verbal; the three tools of communicating a character's emotional journey; how, if you really want to hammer a moment, you need to bang on it; and, coming back to our sports analogy, how dialogue is a team sport. Show notes at https://bit.ly/TIAP198 D...2023-08-0853 min
Stark Reflections on Writing and PublishingThe Dialogue Doctor Will See You Know With Jeff ElkinsMark interviews Jeff Elkins about his writing, about dialogue and character voice, about his new book The Dialogue Doctor Will See You Now, and more . . . Prior to the interview, Mark shares the winners of the complimentary tickets to BookMARCon, the surprise winners of complimentary pizza, a personal update, and a word from this episode's sponsor. You can learn more about how you can get your audiobooks distributed to retailers and library systems around the world at starkreflections.ca/Findaway. During their conversation Mark and Jeff talk about: Jeff's "nickname" as "The Dialogue D...2023-06-301h 05Stark Reflections on Writing and PublishingThe Dialogue Doctor Will See You Know With Jeff ElkinsMark interviews Jeff Elkins about his writing, about dialogue and character voice, about his new book The Dialogue Doctor Will See You Now, and more . . . Prior to the interview, Mark shares the winners of the complimentary tickets to BookMARCon, the surprise winners of complimentary pizza, a personal update, and a word from this episode's sponsor. You can learn more about how you can get your audiobooks distributed to retailers and library systems around the world at starkreflections.ca/Findaway. During their conversation Mark and Jeff talk about: Jeff's "nickname" as "The Dialogue D...2023-06-301h 05
Writing Pursuits61: Mastering the Art of Dialogue with Jeff ElkinsJeff Elkins, aka, the Dialogue Doctor, who is an author, podcast host, and writing coach. Jeff shares his experience of conducting over 200 coaching sessions to help authors improve their dialogue and create engaging characters. He explains that the ideas and techniques in his book, "The Dialogue Doctor Will See You Now: How to Write Dialogue and Characters Readers Will Love," were developed through collaborative efforts within the dialogue doctor community. He emphasizes the importance of dialogue in immersing readers in a story and discusses the distinction between dialogue and exposition.Jeff also provides insights on...2023-06-3045 min
Writer Craft PodcastEp119: The Seven Components of Dialogue, with Dialogue Doctor Jeff ElkinsAnnouncements: free 7-day trial of my Mary Poppins Fan tier on Patreon. Regularly 15/mo https://patreon.com/valerieihsan. I've started a new book and will be rolling out the chapters as I write them on Patreon. Early Access; Feedback encouraged. Watch me write a book in real time. shared lodging ticket; $650; Go to valerieihsan.com/shopping Focused Fan $50/mo includes one group mastermind call/month + weekly 1:1 15-minute accountability calls and emails + monthly scene analysis. Group Coaching Sept 12- Dec 12 $500 for 3-months ($165/mo) Patron announcement: UPDATE: Valerie: Patreon, podcast, emails, weekly planning Erick: website re-launched erickm...2023-06-211h 01
The Author Wheel PodcastFinding Your Character's Voice with the Dialogue Doctor, Jeff ElkinsDefining character voice, writing for stress relief, and finding your own path . . .We were thrilled to have Jeff Elkins, the Dialogue Doctor, join us on this week's show! It was an incredible interview, with SO MANY fantastic nuggets of wisdom. We talked about everything from coming from a non-writing background and how hard it was to admit we were writers, to developing character through their dialogue, and the fact that readers want something familiar with a twist.Jeff is the author of 10 novels, an ongoing vella, and over 100 short stories. He trains authors...2023-02-061h 03
Going North Podcast#LocalAuthor Bonus Ep. – “Inside Outside” with Jeff Elkins (@Jffelkins)“Humility brings a miraculous life.” – Jeff ElkinsToday’s featured award-winning author is father, husband, ex. Pastor, Chief Script Engineer, and fellow Baltimore Bookcaster (Author Who Podcasts), Jeff Elkins. Jeff and I had a fun chat about his latest book, “Inside Outside”, why it’s okay to question your beliefs to learn more about them, and tons more!! Key Things You’ll Learn:The inspiration behind his latest book and what to expect from itWhy observation and humility are key traits of successful leadersWhy it’s okay to reflect a...2022-10-151h 10
REVcoveryJeff Elkins Saves HimselfThis week we are delighted to introduce you to our new friend, former minister, and current member of the REVcovery Community, Jeff Elkins! This episode really is a full circle moment for us because neither Justin or Sarah knew Jeff before this podcast got started. Jeff is an active member of our REVcovery Discord Community and after learning more about his story and seeing how much of the work he has already done we know we had to have him on the show. This episode is a special one folks so sit back and enjoy your time this week...2022-10-041h 01
Revision WizardsE05 - Interview With Jeff ElkinsToday, Jeff Elkins, the Dialogue Doctor, wins the podcast!
Books, Movies, and Authors
Romancing the Stone (1984)
Minority Report (2002)
Grease (1978)
The Once And Future King by T.H. White
Frankenstein by Mary Shelley
House in the Cerulean Sea by T.J. Clune
Story Grid by Shawn Coyne
Save the Cat! By Blake Snyder
Save the Cat! Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody
Story: Substance, Structure, Style and the Principles of Screenwriting by Robert McKee
2022-09-0857 minStark Reflections on Writing and Publishing"Let's Talk Dialogue with Jeff Elkins," He Said ReflectivelyMark has a conversation with Jeff Elkins, The Dialogue Doctor. Prior to the main segment, Mark explains his goof-up that led to releasing this particular episode and then shares a few words about this episode's sponsor. You can learn more about how you can get your work distributed to retailers and library systems around the world at starkreflections.ca/Findaway. During their conversation Mark and Jeff speak, chat, discuss, converse, reflect, consider, chew on, and talk about about: How a book that is 160 K can read like it's so much shorter because...2022-09-0239 minStark Reflections on Writing and Publishing"Let's Talk Dialogue with Jeff Elkins," He Said ReflectivelyMark has a conversation with Jeff Elkins, The Dialogue Doctor. Prior to the main segment, Mark explains his goof-up that led to releasing this particular episode and then shares a few words about this episode's sponsor. You can learn more about how you can get your work distributed to retailers and library systems around the world at starkreflections.ca/Findaway. During their conversation Mark and Jeff speak, chat, discuss, converse, reflect, consider, chew on, and talk about about: How a book that is 160 K can read like it's so much shorter because...2022-09-0239 minThe Indy Author PodcastThe Color Wheel of Characterization with Jeff Elkins - #131 The Indy Author PodcastJeff Elkins, the Dialogue Doctor, discusses THE COLOR WHEEL OF CHARACTERIZATION. He discusses the building blocks of character voice, getting past physical description, the musicality of character voice, letting modulation happen, bolstering scene tone with character voice, and creating the emotional journey. Do any of those topics pique your interest? Check out my new YouTube playlist 2 MINUTES OF INDY https://bit.ly/2MinutesOfIndy, where over the week following the airing of the episode, I’ll be posting brief video clips from the interview on each of those topics! You can also catch up on some highlights of pr...2022-05-0348 min
Writing Pursuits20: Interview with Jeff Elkins, The Dialogue DoctorShow NotesToday I welcome Jeff Elkins to Writing Pursuits. Jeff is an author of more than 10 novels, an editor, and a professional speaker. He is the host of the Dialogue Doctor Podcast and a Three Story Method Certified editor. Links:WritingPursuits.comInstagram: @WritingPursuitsPodcastThree Story Method Certified EditorKathreseMcKee.comMailerlite (affiliate link)YourFirstChapter.comGuest Links:DialogueDoctor.com2022 Workshops5 Mistakes You're Making with Your Dialogue2022-02-0835 minThe Indy Author PodcastInbetweenisode 116 - Creating Community, Content, and Creative Energy with Jeff ElkinsIn this inbetweenisode of The Indy Author Podcast, I pose a question to fellow podcaster Jeff Elkins about what he's getting from The Dialogue Doctor podcast, both for himself and in terms of his goals related to helping other authors, that's different after over 70 episodes than he expected when he did his first episode. As is often the case when I speak with Jeff, he took that question in a truly wonderful direction. He talked about the importance to him of building community, and how that differs from podcasters like me whose primary goal is to provide content (and...2022-01-2128 minThe Indy Author PodcastEpisode 111 - Using Engines, Anchors, and Hazards to Define Character Voice with Jeff ElkinsThis week on The Indy Author Podcast, Jeff Elkins, the Dialogue Doctor, talks about USING ENGINES, ANCHORS, AND HAZARDS TO DEFINE CHARACTER VOICE. He talks about how words like hero and villain, while useful for assessing plot, are less useful for assessing character development, or how the character operates in culture and how he or she negotiates the relationships with the people around them. We delve into examples, including BRIDGET JONES’S DIARY, LORD OF THE RINGS, HARRY POTTER, and GAME OF THRONES, to understand how the characters surrounding the protagonist, or vehicle character, function as engines, anchors, or ha...2021-12-2151 min
Creator Dad PodcastFinding Creative Time with Five Kids with Jeff ElkinsJeff Elkins writes thriller novels, helps other writers improve their dialogue through his company, The Dialogue Doctor, and has a full-time job. Oh yeah, and he has five kids! How does he get so much done? Join Jeff and I as we discuss the balance of writing, building a side hustle from scratch, and working a full-time day job, all while being a loving husband and father.
I’m Zach Bohannon—I make my living telling stories, but I’m also a metal head, retired drummer, avid gamer, and most importantly, a loving husband and father. Join me eac...2021-11-0958 min
Going North PodcastEp. 378 – “Writing Adventures with The Dialogue Doctor” with Jeff Elkins (@Jffelkins)“My emotional stability can’t be based on mirages of success.” – Jeff Elkins Today’s featured award-winning author is father, husband, ex. Pastor, Chief Script Engineer, and fellow Baltimore Bookcaster (Author Who Podcasts), Jeff Elkins. Jeff and I had a fun chat about his writing journey, using rockbottom moments to find your one thing to soar out of it, and tons more!!! Key Thing’s You’ll Learn: What led Jeff to become a writer. Why it’s important to know what genre your book truly belongs in. How Jeff stays...2021-07-171h 16
The Creative Penn Podcast For WritersWriting Dialogue And Character Voice With Jeff ElkinsHow can we write authentic and engaging character dialogue? How can we incorporate sub-text that deepens our writing? Jeff Elkins, The Dialogue Doctor explains more in this interview. In the intro, the new AudibleGate site; scammers using big publisher names [Writer Beware]; Vellum update for Ingram PDF [Vellum software; my tools and tutorials] ; Do BookBub […]
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Your Enneagram Coach, the PodcastEpisode 39: How the Enneagram Integrates with Church Ministry with Adam Breckenridge and Elena ElkinsToday, Beth and Jeff talk to Adam Breckenridge (Pastor and Type 6) and Elena Elkins (New International affiliate and Type 4) about being certified Enneagram Coaches with YEC and using the Enneagram in their church ministries. Have you considered becoming an Enneagram coach? Open registration for our certified course opens February 1st - 7th. We can't wait to see you there! Mentioned in this episode: The Relational Soul The Enneagram a Christian Perspective The Road Back to You Wholeheartedness Becoming an Enn...2021-01-261h 04
Ink in Your VeinsEp. 215: Jeff Elkins on Making Dialogue Really WORK in Your Book!Jeff Elkins is the author of twelve novels and leads the writing team for an innovative technology company that simulates difficult conversations for professionals to practice. In the Fall of 2020, Jeff began a new business, DialogueDoctor.com, that helps writers defeat mono-mouth by coaching them to build engaging characters and write realistic dialogue that will pull readers into their work and keep them reading over multiple books. Jeff lives outside of Baltimore in the United States with his wife and five kids. How Do You Write Podcast: Explore the processes of working writers with bestselling author Ra...2020-12-181h 06The Indy Author PodcastEpisode 048 - Building Great Protagonist and Antagonist Voices with Jeff ElkinsJeff Elkins, The Dialogue Doctor, talks about building great protagonist and antagonist voices. He discusses how to build a villain voice that complements and contrasts to the hero's voice, how to use quirks to help define a character's voice, and how secondary characters can empower the change you want to make in the protagonist. Jeff Elkins is a novelist, ghostwriter, and editor with more than 10 novels on the market. During the day, he leads the writing team for a company that simulates difficult conversations for professionals to practice. He also helps authors improve their dialogue in order...2020-10-1354 minStark Reflections on Writing and PublishingA Conversation with Jeff Elkins The Dialogue DoctorIn this episode Mark chats with Jeff Elkins, The Dialogue Doctor, about the importance of solid dialogue for characterization, moving a plot along, and creating a bestselling novel. Prior to the interview, Mark shares shares comments from recent episodes, welcomes new Patron, Macy Dixon, offers a personal update, and says a word about this episode's sponsor... You can learn more about how you can get your work distributed to retailers and library systems around the world at starkreflections.ca/Findaway. During their conversation, Mark and Jeff talk about: What good dialogue is...2020-10-091h 06Stark Reflections on Writing and PublishingA Conversation with Jeff Elkins The Dialogue DoctorIn this episode Mark chats with Jeff Elkins, The Dialogue Doctor, about the importance of solid dialogue for characterization, moving a plot along, and creating a bestselling novel. Prior to the interview, Mark shares shares comments from recent episodes, welcomes new Patron, Macy Dixon, offers a personal update, and says a word about this episode's sponsor... You can learn more about how you can get your work distributed to retailers and library systems around the world at starkreflections.ca/Findaway. During their conversation, Mark and Jeff talk about: What good dialogue is...2020-10-091h 06
Quarter Four Podcast with Michael ElkinsEpisode 25: Jeff Darlington - ESPN NFL Television ReporterWelcome to a new episode of Game 7: The Sports, Business and Lifestyle Podcast. I’m Michael Elkins, labor and employment attorney, founder of the law firm MLE Law, and your host.My guest this month is Jeff Darlington. Jeff is an American television reporter with ESPN Productions, where he’s a regular on such shows as SportsCenter and NFL Countdown. He is known for high-level interviews with NFL stars like Antonio Brown, Tom Brady and Jared Goff. Jeff is known for breaking the story that Tom Brady was leaving the New England Patriots (something we discuss in deta...2020-09-2044 min