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The Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 21: DeparturesFINAL CHAPTER! As a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-04-0709 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 20: The DonationAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-04-0609 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 19: Unfinished BusinessAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-04-0511 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 18: The Last Search PartyAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-04-0411 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 17: Ice Cream InterruptedAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-04-0306 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 16: Anand & AndreAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-04-0206 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 15: The Garage SaleAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-04-0108 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 14: The FundraiserAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-3112 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 13: Martha Gets FiredAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2907 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 12: The wheelbarrowAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2809 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 11: The Cat PeopleAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2709 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 10: The Rising TideAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2616 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 9: The Farm StoreAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2509 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 8: The Amusement ParkAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2409 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 7: Posters and a Tarzan RopeAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2309 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 6: The SearchAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2206 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 5: The FortAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2111 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 4: Six Rafters BackAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break staycations, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-2011 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 3: The Closet Door OpensAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-1911 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 2: Sticky SituationsAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-1809 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastCCLL - Chapter 1: ArrivalsAs a special treat to help us get through our extra long spring break, I’m releasing a chapter a day of me reading my novel THE CAT, THE CASH, THE LEAP, AND THE LIST.2020-03-1713 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastFrozen: Story Structure AnalysisThis week we're all nestled in for the extended dance mix of Spring break, along with most of the country. We're breaking down the story structure for the movie Frozen. Nora's even in this one! Because, really, what choice does she have when we are all cooped up together?2020-03-1611 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastIvy & Bean Break the Fossil RecordWe're back from hiatus! Almost five-year-old Alma Bea has taken over co-host duties from her almost teenaged sister, Nora. This week, we're looking at the story structure of Book 3 of the Ivy & Bean series: Ivy & Bean Break the Fossil Record. Contains spoilers!2020-03-0112 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastJamie Sumner, Author of ROLL WITH ITThis week with speak with Jamie Sumner, author of the break out hit novel Roll With It. She dishes about her books and writing process as well as her love of baking and we all share what we made for Thanksgiving dessert. Jamie's essays have appeared in the New York Times and the Washington Post. She writes and speaks about disability in literature. She loves stories that celebrate the grit and beauty in all kids. She has two more forthcoming middle grade novels due out in 2020 and 2021. Visit her and sign up for her mailing list at www.jamie-sumner.com.2019-11-3026 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastSeason 8, Episode 3: Award Winning Author Julie SternbergThis week we interview author Julie Sternberg who's written 8 books for kids of all ages including the wonderful LIKE PICKLE JUICE ON A COOKIE. We talk to Julie about how she became a writer and how she got the idea for her first book and what she does when she doesn't feel like writing.2019-11-1426 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastSeason 8, Episode 2: Kristin Glasbergen, Author of the Dragon Canyon SeriesThis week we to talk Kristin Glasbergen, a Canadian author who was brilliant enough to mix Lit RPG with Dragons! She writes a middle grade series called Dragon Canyon. The first book is Fire of Four and we learn the story behind it and the help she got from her 12-year-old, dragon-loving daughter.2019-10-3117 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastSeason 8, Episode 1: Valerie Francis, Author of Nature KnightsThis season we're launching a series of interviews with authors of middle grade fiction. First up, Valerie Francis, author of Nature Knights, Crossing the Rubicon, a middle grade fantasy. Valerie Francis is both author and Certified Story Grid Editor. She has published fiction for both women (love stories for busy women) and children (middle grade fantasy), and is currently working on her first thriller.
As a bona fide story nerd, her passion for the craft of storytelling led her to become a Certified Story Grid Editor in 2017. Her non-fiction credits include a Story Grid Guide to Bram Stoker’s Dracula (pu...2019-10-2430 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS7, E6: School Visit RecapWe describe a school visit we did —in matching outfits—where we tried to convince a bunch of kids to become writers and gave them the secrets they need to know.2019-10-0614 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS7, E5: Wayward Son by Rainbow RowellWe are SO excited to talk about the release of the second book in the Simon Snow series from Rainbow Rowell. No spoilers!2019-09-2913 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS7, E4: MoanaNora’s got homework so Alma is our guest cohost for this episode. So, we’re looking at the story structure for Moana. Because the four-year-old got to choose the story.2019-09-2411 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS7, E3: Nora's Foolscap ContinuedThis week we brainstorm and work through some ideas in Nora's story plotting—playing with the idea of time travel in different eras. There might be a climax that takes place in the kitchen at Hampton Court Palace!
Read full show notes at Mommyspen.com.2019-09-0117 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS7, E2: Nora's Foolscap - Part 1In this episode, 12-year-old Nora starts brainstorming some details to plan her story and confesses that wearing headbands makes her feel "elevated," a feeling she shares with her protagonist.
Read full show notes at Mommyspen.com2019-08-2324 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS7, E1: Nora Starts Story PlanningThis season 12-year-old Nora is going to write a short story using all of the story structure principles we’ve been discussing for the past year on the podcast. We discuss how to start story planning. Follow along and write your own story!2019-08-1715 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS6, E8: The School for Good and EvilNora had to pilot the podcast ship this week due to severe little sister interference. She analyzes book 1 in the popular series The School for Good and Evil using the four-act structure.2019-08-0419 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS6, E7: Mary PoppinsThis week, we're going backwards, looking at the original Mary Poppins movie after our analysis of Mary Poppins Returns last episode. This time, we're looking at it through the 5 Commandments of Story developed by Shawn Coyne of Story Grid.2019-07-2617 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS6, E6: Mary Poppins ReturnsIt’s summer and we’re lazy so we’re doing a movie instead of a book. We liked Mary Poppins Returns way more than we thought we would and we’re analyzing the four act structure.2019-07-1426 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS6, E5: Sense and Sensibility by Jane AustenThis week we dissect Sense and Sensibility by Jane Austen, looking at the five commandments of storytelling for both Eleanor and Marianne’s story arcs.2019-07-0619 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS6, E4: The Book of BoyThis week we discuss the BRILLIANT middle grade novel THE BOOK OF BOY by Catherine Gilbert Murdoch. The first part of the episode we tell you why you should read the book, then deconstruct the book’s structure, complete with spoilers.2019-06-2925 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS6, E3: Front Desk by Kelly Yang - Review and Story Structure AnalysisIf you're looking for books that feature diverse characters and tackle inclusion themes (and you should be), this lovely little book deserves a spot in your stack. It's the story of a young Chinese immigrant, Mia Tang, who helps her parents manage a hotel and uses her ever-improving English skills to help just about everyone around her.
Full show notes at Mommyspen.com2019-06-2121 min
The Mommy’s Pen PodcastS6, E2: One Mixed-Up NightWe start off with a few Alma anecdotes and then launch into this week’s book review: ONE MIXED-UP NIGHT by the brilliant and lovely Catherine Newman who is everything, amen.2019-06-0925 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS6, E1: Carry On by Rainbow Rowell - Story Structure AnalysisThis week we’re gushing over a young adult novel we love: Carry On by Rainbow Rowell. First we talk about why we love it. Then we switch to spoiler territory and look at the four act structure of the book and break down the genres.2019-05-3155 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS5, E5: The FortThis week is the last chapter in the beginning hook of my novel: The Cat, the Cash, the Leap, and the List.2019-05-2418 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastSeason 5, Episode 4: Six Rafters BackWe're reading from my novel, The Cat, the Cash, the Leap, and the List. In chapter 4, we find out what Martha's parents have to say about her secret cat adoption and we see Sanjay hide something he was supposed to share with his brother.2019-05-1715 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS5, E3: The Closet Door Opens - Chapter 3 of The Cat, The Cash, The Leap, and the ListSince my book, The Cat, the Cash, the Leap and the List will be published on May 17, we decided to give you a preview by reading from it up to the first plot point.
This episode is Chapter 3, where Martha's secretly stashed cat is discovered.2019-05-1014 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS5, E2: Chapter 2 of The Cat, the Cash, the Leap, and the ListFor season 5, we've decided to read aloud from my forthcoming middle grade novel, The Cat, the Cash, the Leap, and the List. Chapter 2 is called "Sticky Situations." We'll keep going until we hit the first plot point.2019-05-0314 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS5, E1: The Cat, the Cash, the Leap, and the List - Chapter 1New season, new format! Since my book, The Cat, the Cash, the Leap and the List will be published on May 17, we decided to give you a preview by reading from it up to the first plot point.
The story has three main kid characters, Martha, Sanjay and Anand. Nora will be reading all the scenes that are in Martha’s point of view, and I’ll be reading the scenes for the other two characters. (Man, I wish Alma could read already because it would be so cool if she could read Anand’s parts.)
Preo...2019-05-0217 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS4, E8: Harry Potter Series - Overarching Story Structure BreakdownWe’ve completed the analysis of all seven books in the Harry Potter series so now we’re taking a look at the overarching structure of the entire series.2019-04-0519 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS4, E7: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Story Structure AnalysisIn this episode, we look at the four-act structure of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, pointing out the first plot point, midpoint shift and second plot point.
Then we analyze the scene where Harry sees the Silver Doe and it leads him to the sword of Godric Gryffindor but then the necklace almost strangles him to death and Ron has to save him.
Finally, we talk about the term “epilogue.”2019-03-2918 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS4, E6: Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince Full Story Structure AnalysisIn this episode, we look at the four-act structure of Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince, pointing out the first plot point, midpoint shift and second plot point. Then we analyze the scene where Narcissa gets Snape to make the unbreakable vow to help Malfoy with this "task." *SOB* Finally, we explain what an "archetype" is.2019-03-2218 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS4, E5: Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix Story Structure AnalysisWe break down the overall story structure of the fifth book in the Harry Potter series, do an in-depth scene analysis of the scene where Harry is interviewed by a blackmailed Rita Skeeter, and explain the term verisimilitude.2019-03-1523 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS4, E4: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire Full Story AnalysisWe look at the four act structure of the fourth book in the Harry Potter series. Then we analyze the scene where Winky gets drunk on butter beer. Finally, we take a look at the concept of POV.2019-03-0830 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS4, E3: Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban Story Structure AnalysisWe look at the four-act structure of Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, pointing out the first plot point, midpoint shift and second plot point. Then we analyze the scene where Harry gets a Firebolt for Christmas from a mysterious patron. Finally, we take a look at the concept of exposition, using the scene where Harry learns that Sirius Black supposedly betrayed his parents to Voldemort.2019-03-0116 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS4, E2: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets Story Structure AnalysisThis week we look at the four-act structure of Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets, pointing out the "tent poles" that hold the story up: the first plot point, the midpoint shift and the second plot point.
Then Nora uses the Five Commandments of Storytelling from the Story Grid to analyze the scene where Harry tricks Lucius Malfoy into setting Dobby free.
Finally, we take a look at the concept of foreshadowing, using the whomping willow as an example.2019-02-2218 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS4, E1 - Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone: Story Structure AnalysisIn our newest season, we’ll be analyzing the story structure for each book in the Harry Potter series using a four act “circus tent” structure. We’ll also choose a juicy scene to analyze using the 5 commandments of storytelling based on Story Grid methodology. This week, it's Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone. We look at the global story and analyze the scene where Harry finds out he's a wizard. Finally, we look at the concept of narrative drive and learn how it makes us keep turning pages!2019-02-1623 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E12: AeschylusWe look at the Aeschylus and his visit to the Oracle and his tragi-comic death. And there’s a bunny health update.2019-02-0210 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E11: Lady Jane GreyPoor Lady Jane Grey -- named to succeed Edward VI, it came as a bit of a shock to her. Still, she stepped up and reigned for a total of nine days. Nora tells the story and Sue points out the story structure. 2019-01-2517 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E10: Mary Tudor, the first ruling queen of EnglandWe tell the story of Mary I, or Bloody Mary, and then discuss how Nora got into history in the first place.2019-01-1817 min
The Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E9: Tudor Love TriangleThis week we tell the story of King Henry VIII of England and how his wish to ditch his first wife lead to the establishment of the Church of England. And we talk about Nora’s new wig and our dirty laundry. Literally.
Episode art of Anne Boleyn by Nora Campbell. Full show notes at mommyspen.com2019-01-1115 min
The Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E8: Hamilton!This week we're back to stories from history and we're looking at our favorite Broadway musical, "Hamilton." We're also adding an extra layer of story analysis, using not only the 5 Commandments of Storytelling, but also a four-act structure I learned from Larry Brooks.2019-01-0529 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E7: Wizarding World ChatIt's the end of the year and we're straying from our usual format for this season to just chat -- mostly about Harry Potter because SOMEONE has spent her entire holiday break on Pottermore and reading Fantastic Beasts screenplays. We also talk about our favorites among the books we've read this year.2018-12-2819 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E6: The Manning MurderersThis week we're telling the story of a pair of Victorian murderers -- husband and wife no less. And we're joined by a very special guest, who's NOT Alma. 2018-12-2110 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E5: Joan d’ArcNora tells the story of Joan of Arc whole breathing like Darth Vader. Special guest appearance by Moana/Alma.2018-12-1513 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E4: The Crimes of Grindelwald - Spoiler Alert!We are so obsessed with the new Fantastic Beasts movie we're taking a break from history this week and instead looking at the 5 commandments of storytelling in "The Crimes of Grindelwald."
Full show notes at mommyspen.com2018-12-0722 min
The Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E3: The Affair of the Diamond NecklaceMarie Antoinette was already reviled, but the Affair of the Diamond Necklace made things much, much worse. My 11-year-old and I tell the story and point out the 5 Commandments of Storytelling along the way.
Full show notes at Mommyspen.com2018-11-3015 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E2: Empress Matilda & StephenNora tells us the story of how Matilda, Empress of Germany, was cheated out of her crown by her cousin Stephen. Sue points out the 5 commandments of story telling during the tale. Then they dish on the new Fantastic Beasts film “Crimes of Grindelwald.2018-11-2316 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS3, E1: The Rise of CleopatraSeason 3 begins! This time around we're doing stories from history and pointing out the 5 commandments of story telling along the way. This week, Nora tells her how Cleopatra became queen of Egypt.
Full show notes at MommyPen.com2018-11-1612 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E12: Status StoriesThis is our final episode for season 2 and we’re looking at the Status genre. It’s all about characters trying to come up in the world and whether we glory in their success or pity their failure.2018-11-0920 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E10: Morality StoriesFew kids are going to knowingly sit down to a Morality story, so you better add lots of humor to make it worth while. We look to Spirit Riding Free to show us how to make a morality story lots of fun using episode 3 of season 2: "Lucky's Super Amazing and Fun Cousin Julian."
Full show notes at mommyspen.com2018-11-0223 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E9: The Crime StoryCrime stories for kids are just plain fun. No, really. We take a look at all the elements of a crime story and look at a great example in season 2, episode 2 of Spirit Riding Free.
Full show notes at Mommyspen.com2018-10-2621 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E8: The Love StoryWe continue our exploration of genre, this time with the help of Jane Austen. We look at Emma, and really, this novel is even more brilliant than I realized once we start looking at the ways it meets the obligatory scenes and conventions of the Love genre.
Full show notes at MommysPen.com2018-10-1928 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E7: The Action GenreThis week we explore the Action Genre using the Netflix series "Spirit Riding Free."2018-10-1217 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E6: Nora Berates Etsy Sellers for Historical InaccuraciesWe're taking a break from our genre series this week with a little slice of life from our house. Listen as Nora surfs Etsy and berates shop owners for historical inaccuracies in their period costumes. No actual shop owners are named (or harmed) in this episode.2018-09-2709 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E5: The Horror GenreNora and Sue dive into what makes something a horror story by taking a look at Neil Gaiman's "Coraline." Horror for kids! What fun!2018-09-2024 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E4: The Performance GenreThis week we take a look at what makes a Performance story by analyzing another episode of Spirit Riding Free: Lucky and the Price of Freedom.
Full show notes at mommyspen.com2018-09-1316 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E3: The Western GenreWe continue our exploration of genre with the help of the excellent kids series "Spirit Riding Free" from Netflix. The episode "Lucky and the Unbreakable Spirit" (season 1, episode 1) is a great example of the Western genre.
Full show notes at MommysPen.com2018-09-0619 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS2, E2: The Worldview Genre & Spirit Riding FreeSue and Nora start their exploration of genre with the help of the excellent kids series "Spirit Riding Free" from Netflix. The episode "Lucky and the Treacherous Trail" (season 1, episode 2) is a great example of the Worldview genre with a Maturation subgenre.2018-08-3019 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastSeason 2, Episode 1This season we're exploring genre. In this episode, we give you the big picture before diving into genre examples in future episodes.2018-08-2321 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS1, E6: Ivy and Bean and the Four-act StructureThis week we take every story element we've learned in the five previous episodes and put them together to analyze "Ivy and Bean" by Annie Barrows. We also get excited for the eleventh book in the series, due out later this month. Nora is on a roll in this one -- thankfully, most of the screaming has been edited out.
Full show notes at http://mommyspen.com2018-08-0921 min
The Mommy’s Pen PodcastS1, E5: Second Plot Point (on Gardam Street)We review "The Penderwicks on Gardam Street," the second book in the five book Penderwicks series, and use it to illustrate the story structure concept of a second plot point. We also discuss how cool it is to wear slippers to a book signing and the various things that make Sue cry.
Full show notes at mommyspen.com.2018-08-0217 min
The Mommy’s Pen PodcastS1, E4: Midpoint ShiftWe review "Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell" by Susanna Clarke and geek out discussing our favorite characters. This episode's art features Nora as Lady Pole for Halloween 2014 (all seven-year-olds choose to costume themselves as obscure literary characters, right?).
Sue explains what the midpoint shift is and why it's her favorite piece of story structure. Nora creates brilliant sound effects to illustrate the character's mindset change at this point in a story.
Full show notes at mommyspen.com.2018-07-2621 min
The Mommy’s Pen PodcastS1, E3: First Pinch PointWe review "The Blackthorn Key," the first book is a fabulous Blackthorn Key Adventure series by Kevin Sands. For this week's story structure lesson, Sue explains what a pinch point is. You also get an entertaining rundown of Britain's Restoration era from amateur historian, Nora. Incidentally, the art featured above for this episode is a Nora original in watercolor pencil. The gentleman William III (a nephew of Charles II). See the full show notes at mommyspen.com2018-07-1911 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS1, E2: First Plot PointNora reviews Cleopatra VII: Daughter of the Nile from the Royals Diaries series. Sue explains the function of a first plot point (FPP) and Nora takes a stab at identifying the FPP in Cleopatra and Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone.
Nora also clues us in on how ancient Egyptians handled body odor (hint: it involves snakes) and points to some great places to learn more about history.
Full show notes at mommyspen.com2018-07-0512 minThe Mommy’s Pen PodcastS1, E1: Inciting IncidentA writer and her eleven-year-old daughter discuss the book “My Name is Victoria” by Lucy Worsely and the concept of an inciting incident. We fight about Lucy W.'s eyebrows and whether or not she has the help of a ghostwriter for her novels.
We also discuss our plans for the podcast: we're gonna talk about books, stories, and story structure. Specifically, in each episode we'll discuss some aspect of story structure. This time around, it's "inciting incident." This is an event that thrusts a character into a particular situation and sucks a reader into a story.
Full show notes at m...2018-06-2511 min